Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Experimentation on animals for any scientific discoveries is always assessed with animal rights parameter.
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, any experiment done on animals for the betterment of humans
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is justified but has its consequences on animals. Malaria, Tuberculosis, Hepatitis, etc have been
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disastrous diseases in the past which has lead to
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andemic
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when no vaccines or cure was available. With the growth in medical research
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humans have aced in developing cures and vaccines with the help of animals. Trials of the vaccines are done beforehand on animals which helps the research to materialise and avoid any mishappenings which could've happened to humans.
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, animals have to deal with the consequences of the trials which can be worst for their life but
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clinical trial helps
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uman
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to ace ahead in health and medical fields. In 1988, Spain had suffered
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pread of Tuberculosis and lead to
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eath of more than 1 lakh people. After
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, medical researches and innumerable trials on animals helped to develop a better cure and vaccine which became a boon for the human
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in saving lives.
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