You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Sam, I am Amulya,

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and my family recently moved into

Aboot

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About

Landing and I reside

to your apartment unit. As part of our new

move in

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we are hosting

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house warming party

this

weekend. Let me give you a brief introduction about myself, I am working as an Integration

engineer

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Engineer

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at Infi Technologies located in Austin. Recently I got transferred to Boston and my new office location is just a mile away from our apartment. We are organising a

get together

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event coming

saturday

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evening, there will be

small

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crowd attending the party. There might be a little sound and inconveniences from our end. I kindly request your cooperation on

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occasion. I would

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like to invite you and your family to the house warming ceremony. We will be having some cultural rituals as per our tradition, followed by games and dinner. Thank you

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. Regards, Amulya

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Every parent wants the best opportunities for their children. Some people believe that school should teach skills but others think that having a range of subjects is best for a child's future development

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.