An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Scott, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am good what about junior does he still calling me Anna. It is
long
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time, I think we met
last
during Susan's marriage in
november
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November
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. As you informed me about
two-week
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the two-week
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holiday plan. I think there
are
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is
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number
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a number
the number
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of places you can visit which will give you
exciting
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an exciting
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experience.
First
of them is
the
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apply
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Kerala which is located in
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southern
sothern
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the sothern
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part of India and
which
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apply
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is famous for
green
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its green
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environment,
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wildlife
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wild life
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wildlife
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and authentic south
indian
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Indian
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food. You can
also
experience local
like
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boat racing which is unique in India.
This
location has
numbers
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number
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of quality hotels at reasonable rates. Normally
weather
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the weather
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is very hot in
this
part of
country
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the country
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, Since you are planning in February during that period
temparature
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temperature
is normal means not cold as well as hot.
hence
come with more casual clothes
also
try some regional clothing. I have
flyer
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a flyer
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of a Tourism board which has complete information about
tour
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the tour
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. I will send it to you by
tommorrow
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tomorrow
. If you need any help contact me at any time, Warm regards, Kailash Kamble.
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