An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Scott, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am good what about junior does he still calling me Anna. It is

long

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time, I think we met

last

during Susan's marriage in

november

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November

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. As you informed me about

two-week

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the two-week

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holiday plan. I think there

are

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number

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a number

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of places you can visit which will give you

exciting

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an exciting

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experience.

First

of them is

the

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apply

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Kerala which is located in

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southern

sothern

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the sothern

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part of India and

which

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apply

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is famous for

green

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its green

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environment,

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wildlife

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wild life

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wildlife

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and authentic south

indian

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Indian

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food. You can

also

experience local

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boat racing which is unique in India.

This

location has

numbers

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of quality hotels at reasonable rates. Normally

weather

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the weather

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is very hot in

this

part of

country

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the country

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, Since you are planning in February during that period

temparature

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temperature

is normal means not cold as well as hot.

hence

come with more casual clothes

also

try some regional clothing. I have

flyer

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a flyer

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of a Tourism board which has complete information about

tour

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the tour

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. I will send it to you by

tommorrow

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tomorrow

. If you need any help contact me at any time, Warm regards, Kailash Kamble.

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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