Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the
last
five years, there has been a rise in varied genres of movies available to consume.
This
is due to the rise in new and fresh talent, who do not belong to big-budget production houses. In my opinion, the above is a positive development and in
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First
and foremost, the advent of over-the-top platforms has given opportunities to several budding filmmakers. These streaming media companies have allowed them to showcase their work without having to invest in big quantities.
Furthermore
, they give an opportunity to aspiring actors to display their skill, they are not restricted to hiring blockbuster superstars in order to promote their movies. To illustrate my point, Nikhil Advani a 22-year-old film, director/producer, shot a movie about slum areas in and around Mumbai. The characters in the movie were played by aspiring artists.
Furthermore
, it was shot on a basic DSLR and the remaining equipment were purchased from Amazon. His movie was streamed on Netflix and it was trending for a quarter in India.
Secondly
, with the rise of new producers, audiences are able to consume a wide variety of topics. From fiction to documentaries to real-life incidents. Back in the days, movies were produced only for entertainment, but nowadays many films come with a message. In a conclusion, streaming media has enabled and made a way for anyone to become filmmakers
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