You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am writing
this
letter in response to
your
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complained
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complaint
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about the high level of sound from my residence since
last
few days. In
this
letter
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I will describe the reason for the noise, my
opologies
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apologies
and measure which I will take to timid the problem. To describe the reason,
actually
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my relatives are staying at my home and they will stay for one more month. Their children are very naughty and they make
enormous
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amount of noise during the evening time before going to bed. Please accept my apologies for
this
act of the kids. I tried to make them calm but they never listen to me and I am extremely sorry for
this
. To solve
this
annoying problem, I am planning to put
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a sound-proof
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sound-proof
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soundproof
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layer of
convas
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canvas
on the walls of the room where children live. Give me
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just
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jus
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just
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two more days to solve
this
problem and
then
you will not be
distrubing
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disturbing
due to the unwanted sound. Hope you will understand my situation and forgive me. Yours sincerely, Sunil Kumar
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