Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

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ong history. Today everybody is highly dependent on it. Especially when we discuss

about

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health, environment. In fact, we can not imagine life without

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it. Human community as well as other living things enjoying

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of benefits.

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erious

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to a complete community. Yes! I partially agree with the above statement. Since

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ong time due to

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branch of science

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human to improve life-span.

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on various virus and bacteria by renown scientist and found various

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vaccines

which help a world many ways. Deadly viruses like polio, Tuberculosis, now are in great control. Another example of it is a human victory over the food shortage in

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poor countries. A great invention in the types of grain seeds

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to increase food production around the world. If we compare Current data according to WHO about food starvation it is very impressive. Despite

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this

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erious threat to

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hole planet. Developing countries used it as

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iological weapon and situation is now out of control. Sino-Japan, Iraq-Kurd war are the greatest examples of

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inventions. In

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ino-Japan war

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Japan used

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biological

weapon on china to control land and kill people. Current incidence covid-19

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imilar track record. In short Genetic engineering has its advantages as well as disadvantages. It is a type of two

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sharp weapon we should use it wisely.

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if we keep our trust in making

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weapons it will turn into

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unstoppable

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International

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community should behave

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

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