In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can be solved?
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To begin
with, there are multifarious factors which trigger more health related
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Firstly
, since today, due to busy schedules, mass prefer to eat food
outside , especially fast food
or frozen food
instead
of cooking at home. As a result
, eating unhealthy or spicy food
on regular basis causes many problems such
as obesity and high cholesterol, for instance
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laziness
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such
issues. First
of all, eliminating the fast and pre-cooked food
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, including more healthy and home cooked
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home-cooked
food
which is loaded with nutrition and vitamins, will be quite beneficial for them. In addition
to this
, joining gym, yoga classes, and doing running and workout as a part of the day, will eliminate the number of disease such
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