You took an elderly member of your family, who was not able to walk properly, to a museum and he/she faced a few problems. Write a letter to the manager of the museum. In your letter, say why you visited the museum describe the problems you faced suggest what can be done to avoid those problems
Dear Sir
ir
Madam,
I am writing regarding a Correct your spelling
or
museum
service.
I have recently visited your museum
with my mother-in-law who turned seventy last
week. She has been living in Kyiv for forty years but has not gone sightseeing yet. Therefore
, I decided to assist her and choose your museum
first
thing due to the fascinating exhibition which you provide.
Having a tour throughout your museum
we felt as if we were in a fairytail
and everything could have gone well if there is not one problem. Correct your spelling
fairytale
In other words
, my mother-in-law has weak legs and is unable to be on foot for a long time. Thus
, she was required to have a rest but, unfortunately, there were no chairs or sofas or anyone else to sit.
If you do not mind, I suggest you establish a lounge zone. It might be in the lobby on the first
floor. Moreover
, if you did this
, it would create a pleasurable atmosphere and entice new visitors to your museum
. This
would exhibit your care about all your customers regardless of their age.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. I wish this
matter would be taken into account.
Yours faithfully,
Helen MyslitskayaSubmitted by myslitskaya.e on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite