Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
The major of individuals assume that at the present time mankind possesses plenty of alternatives in every sphere of life.
Moreover
, they claim that the chance to have a variety of options leads to problems connecting with having less time. However
, there are millions of people who are unable to choose from their birth time. Actually, every day
we need to select food that we will consume, clothes that we will wear and most of us have such
types of daily problems. The wide variety is available for people unless on the fact of having more or less money, being more or less educated. There so many fabrics and manufactures that produce various kinds of products, and options are limiting only because of some conditions, as a wider list of conditions as fewer options of choice. Nowadays when there are so many technologies, sciences that are developing day
by day
it is almost impossible to say that there are no ways or options. The choice is determined by who we are and who
we want to be, Change the pronoun
whom
that is
why it is really wide and an enormous problem having so many alternative ways. Most of the people tend to believe that being unable to have more variants decrease humanity problems, but it is definitely better to be able to alter your decision in everything. For instance
real lovers who have married happier than individuals who had fallen in love with others but because of some conditions couldn't be together with them, and their children have risen in a secure and warm family. To sum up, mankind day
by day
has been more developing in each way, and thanks to this
the number of options is skyrocketing. I totally with that, and suppose that it is a really good opportunity to have a choice. Because there are people who are limited in that.Submitted by kartoseckam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
