Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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orld is witnessing so much of wrongdoings . Punishments given for these are always a matter of controversy. One set of individuals are inclined towards fixed punishments for every
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,whereas others insist on considering the context and background while deciding the punishment. Both view angles will be discussed in
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essay. On the one hand ,attaching a certain degree of punishment to a type of crime can make the accused know the consequences beforehand.
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may sometimes make them commit the crime if they are not afraid of the
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, there should be fixed offensive action for
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crimes
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as taking the law into hand and
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harassment
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On the other hand
,the law should
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consider individual upbringing, family environment,the reason for
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committing
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the crime because some times all the
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factors
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the mind of the
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, we can see various cases in the local newspaper where teenagers do asocial deeds only due to their inheritance from their family. In a nutshell, I incline more
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towards
taking into concern the individual's background and analysing it before proceeding with the punishment.
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