It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

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In many countries, a huge number of students are choosing to not

study

science

subjects. In

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essay, I will discuss the factors causing

this

problem and the effects it has on society. There are many reasons that

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students tend to choose

science

subjects to

study

Firstly

science

subjects are usually more difficult which require students to put more effort

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their

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it is a boring subject if the teaching approach is not right. Take Chemistry as an example, in order to pass

this

subject students are required to do several

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types of research

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and complete numerous projects that prevent them from having free time.

Also

, in some countries

such

as Vietnam, experiments are not widely taught at school which make

science

subjects tend to be boring with only theories.

As a result

science

subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to sociology or business.

Secondly

, graduating from

science

fields have fewer employment opportunities, students are less likely to choose these majors.

Instead

of that, they would rather choose subjects that allow them to easily find jobs in the future. The lack of students studying

science

subjects can lead to several major consequences in

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society. One of the main consequences is that

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students will graduate and work in

science

areas

therefore

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scientists.

This

would lead to fewer

science

developments and

also

prevents people’s quality

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life from improving.

Additionally

, when a huge number of students choose to do sociology or business, jobs in these areas could be full and run out of vacancies.

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, many graduate students can be unemployed which can be a burden to society. In conclusion, students tend to choose easier subjects at school to

study

due to the difficulty and boredness,

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these subjects can have fewer employment opportunities. Because of that, students prefer doing other subjects which can cause several major consequences.

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