It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

In many countries, a huge number of students are choosing to not
study
science
subjects. In
this
essay, I will discuss the factors causing
this
problem and the effects it has on society. There are many reasons that
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students tend to choose
science
subjects to
study
.
Firstly
,
science
subjects are usually more difficult which require students to put more effort
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their
study
,
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it is a boring subject if the teaching approach is not right. Take Chemistry as an example, in order to pass
this
subject students are required to do several
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and complete numerous projects that prevent them from having free time.
Also
, in some countries
such
as Vietnam, experiments are not widely taught at school which make
science
subjects tend to be boring with only theories.
As a result
,
science
subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to sociology or business.
Secondly
, graduating from
science
fields have fewer employment opportunities, students are less likely to choose these majors.
Instead
of that, they would rather choose subjects that allow them to easily find jobs in the future. The lack of students studying
science
subjects can lead to several major consequences in
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society. One of the main consequences is that
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students will graduate and work in
science
areas
therefore
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scientists.
This
would lead to fewer
science
developments and
also
prevents people’s quality
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life from improving.
Additionally
, when a huge number of students choose to do sociology or business, jobs in these areas could be full and run out of vacancies.
Therefore
, many graduate students can be unemployed which can be a burden to society. In conclusion, students tend to choose easier subjects at school to
study
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these subjects can have fewer employment opportunities. Because of that, students prefer doing other subjects which can cause several major consequences.
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