Cycling is healthier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular . What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

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Nowadays, the majority of people consider cycling as an old-fashion while only a few people vouch for

this

healthier option. In

this

fast-paced world, people no-longer consider the environment-friendly form of transport

instead

of opting for their own cars. In

this

essay, we will discuss the reason behind

this

trend and the possible solutions to overcome

this

attitude.

Firstly

, most of the people do not prefer to spend their precious time in travelling and wanted to reach their destination as soon as possible

hence

, they prefer the fastest mode of transportation.

Secondly

, there is a huge increase in spending capacity among the population so the people consider owning a car as a prestige symbol.

Finally

, awareness of the benefits of using bikes is inadequate among youngsters. There is a need for people to change their attitude and mindset to choose a healthier lifestyle.

For example

, the doctors recommend patients to consider cycling and walking to overcome obesity.

Therefore

, people consider cycling as a treatment and not as a habit.

Hence

, the awareness of adopting a healthier lifestyle

such

as walking, exercising, cycling etc., should be taught right from school education.

Thus

, students will no longer consider

this

as a treatment for a condition and start practising on a daily basis. The government should

also

encourage everyone to consider a bike as a mode of transport

instead

of heavy vehicles as

this

can help to reduce carbon emission which in turn contributes to reducing air pollution. In conclusion, the government and the NGO's should work together in creating awareness among the people by conducting regular campaigns and competitions to encourage cycling.

Also

, the MNC's can promote eco-drive among their employees to reduce pollution.

Submitted by Srinithi Ramesh on Wed Sep 16 2020

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Cycling is healthier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular . What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media and others believe opposite.

Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?

An essay to introduce yourself. What is your background in English? what do you want to tell the teacher?

Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages.

Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?