Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. Discuss advantage and disadvantages to children doing so?

There is no doubt that taking part in a job during free time is encouraged by most of the parents. By doing

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, the young ones would get hands-on experience and earn some money.

However

, problems

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as exploitation and lack

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time for study can be irrupted. On the one hand, the supporters of the part-time work argue that

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would prepare

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them to have an appropriate skill, which may assist them to get a respectful career in their adulthood.

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is because

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they possess a good amount of training on a particular field.

For instance

, In many countries, they motivate the children to take some employment for skill development, like in Sweden.

Therefore

, experts have a view that

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could have a beneficial effect on the kids.

On the other hand

, opponents of the above- argument say that

this

working culture may not be fruitful.

This

is because the vulnerable younger generation could be exploited by their employers.

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, they may expose to dangerous scenarios as they rarely provide

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any safety or security equipment.

Similarly

, the

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ones

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may find it difficult to juggle with both job and education and extra-curricular activities.

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, Few nations, where employment law is not stringent allow children to participate

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some works, usually, they go for manual works, that are lethal. In conclusion, the young one may be motivated to involve in some activities to earn some financial gains.

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can have some positives along with huge repercussions,

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most of the scientists do not allow to

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practice

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system on the whole.