In the past, people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

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The small community promotes a better neighbourhood. Because, in a little area, is easy to get acquainted with the inhabitants and maintain communication with them.

Consequently

, the neighbours are being together to share emotions and offer their hands in case of difficulties. That means, living in

such

area provides mental supports.

For example

, in my village, a poor young boy has got the expensive treatment for having colon cancer with the help of the local community as they strongly felt for the boy of their society.

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In the past, people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or any other academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views.

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines’ are now widely known and used. The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it. To what extent you agree or disagree?