In some areas of US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Normally, in most of the country

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a ‘curfew’ is considered the

last

means to

control

the worst

situation

. Within the few high alert zones of United States, a ‘curfew’ is announced with a guideline for teenagers, that not to come out of the door, after a certain time at night without the company of an adult. In my opinion, children must not come out of the house during

such

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ituation.

Firstly

, unexpected incidents happen in the nation daily while the authority takes the actions to

control

the position,

however

, when government think the

situation

is out of

control

a ‘curfew’ is imposed in terms of master’s stroke at that moment.

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, just

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ew months ago, because of one incident in the whole US, there was a big riot everywhere and people came out on streets, even police and the higher authorities failed to

control

the

situation

, which forced the state administration to put a ’curfew’ in some part of the US. During

such

chaos, it is strongly advisable for the children to be safe in the house and should not come out unless an emergency.

On the other hand

, I have seen many cases in which the government declared a ‘curfew’ with some guideline. To elaborate, sometimes there is some restriction in a ‘curfew’ after a day off,

however

, in some of the cases there are rules and regulation, that minor should not come out of home after evening and in case of any urgency, they must be accompanied by adults or their parents. In conclusion, in any alert time, may it is caused by a man-made or natural,

first

announcement for its citizens by countries is ‘stay home, stay safe’. During

such

a dangerous atmosphere small kids should never come out neither in day nor in the night time.

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In some areas of US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of the public.

Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to gat a university education. Some people believw that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some kids become famous at a very younge age. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that,in today’s world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.