Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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ndustrial revolution, every country takes its natural resources for granted. Growth doesn’t mean we have to make earth hazardous. In
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the problems and their possible solutions. Increase in industrial development is good to any country as it gives employment and livelihood to many people but at the same time
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it does many harms to our mother nature by disposing waste into land and water. We didn’t spare even the air we breathe, disposal of smoke from industries, increase in vehicle usage and much more contributes to the pollution leading to global warming. All these contributing factors
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ise in natural disaster all over the world.
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, Chennai was affected by flood in 2015 where people lost their homes, property and one-fourth of the population died. And the aftereffects were even
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, colossal people were pushed under poverty and people couldn’t afford education to their children as they were suffering even to fulfil their basic needs
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all the water bodies and river pathway’s and constructed building,
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ext ten years,
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arth will not be survivable. We will long for unpolluted air, water and food. Is
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what we leave behind for our future generations? What we give is What we get –
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adage is true. All countries should learn to grow without deteriorating our environment which may cause devastation in
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ong run. Its high time,
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overnment should enforce stern laws to keep a check on our environment. Only when
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arth is survivable, we can educate, grow and prosper together. I strongly feel that it’s time to decide on what is the priority.
Submitted by Srinithi Ramesh on

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