Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but others think that it is the matter of personal choice and personal responsibility.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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by the government is the best ways for keeping public health.H
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nurtritious
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nutritious
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is people will have food
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his can increase the number of good health in our society.Add a space
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opportunity
chosing
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choosing
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a different
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a different life style
different life styles
life styles
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lifestyles
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healthy food
a portion of healthy food
food
that I intersted
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interested
this
is my soul and I should keep it fit.
In conclusion, government laws and personal responsibility have an advantage in the
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can help for Add an article
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