people say that instead of we seeing the internet as a means of creating diverse communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned on the effect it is having on our social interactions. Do you agree or not.

Truly people say that
instead
of
we
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
seeing the
internet
as a means of creating diverse
communication
possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned
on
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about
with
the effect it is having on our social interactions which I totally agree
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
. One of the reasons I agree
to
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with
this
view is because people now spend more time on the
internet
doing what doesn'
t
benefit them.
For instance
, watching videos of immoral activities, as the time being spent watching these videos could be spent on building good
communication
skills with people around.
Moreover
, people
now resort
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are now resorting
to the
internet
to do things that could be done in person or be done by people around them.
Furthermore
, the
internet
has helped people to lessen their interactions with
people which
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people, which
doesn'
t
help in building their people skills, good
communication
skills, leadership skills and all other skills needed for good social interaction.
For instance
, I prefer using the
internet
(
Accept space
(
WhatsApp to be precise) to message my friend or roommate
that is
around me for something I need all because I probably don'
t
want to get up from where am sitting or I don'
t
actually feel like talking.
However
, the
internet
has truly created ways of communicating worldwide through ( Skype, Facebook, WhatsApp, Twitter, Instagram, Zoom, Email, and all other social medias) so you don'
t
have to travel far or take a lot of time to send a letter to someone in another country or journey down to deliver goods and services to a person but
this
same
internet
has so much limited physical and social interactions between people. In conclusion, the
internet
does not help to build one's people skills,
communication
skills and other necessary skills needed to have a good, proper and sound social interaction with people.
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