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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001
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The given pie charts illustrate
us
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 the data about the proportion of alteration that a special UK school spent in three years which were 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, what stands out from the three charts
are
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is
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 that teacher
salaries
 were the highest expense
while
 insurances were the lowest in all three years.
Moreover
, the cost of insurance and furniture and other equipment increased,
although
 other worker
salaries
 and resources e.g. books declined slightly during the given years. When
looked
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looking
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 at the graphs in detail,
rate
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the rate
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 of teacher
salaries
 made up approximately half of all the costs.
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Expenses
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Expense
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The expense
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 of insurance increased from 2% to %8
in contrast
, resources fell
down
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apply
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between 1981 and 2001.
According to
 the graphs
furniture
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the furniture
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 and equipment ratio had
flactuately
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fluctuated
fluctuate
increasing
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increased
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 that it reached
to
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apply
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a quarter of all costs in 2001. In 1981 other
worker
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workers
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salaries
 account for
near
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nearly
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 a fourth of all spending,
however
,
this
 plunged to 15 % in 2001.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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