Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Knowledge is an important part of the modern world.

the

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The

importance of knowledge has been increasing in recent years.

some

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Some

people believe that there is no

value

of knowing the past to live in the present and some of them defend that it is an important fact to know the past and I agree with the

value

of the past because I believe that people can understand the

value

of present by looking at the past.

Also people

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Also, people

can predict the present by looking at

past

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the past

Firstly

, past time is a really good tool to predict and say something about the future because the present is the reflection of the past.

For example

, if somebody

create

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creates

a business in a new field that he or she has never established

any thing

an indefinite thing

anything

before, they can easily check the past market data to predict to present and future. And

that is

one of the major

tool

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tools

when somebody or firms go into a new field.

Secondly

, past is a very good opportunity to see the culture, history and other things.

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looking at the

past people

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past, people

can really feel the importance and the

value

of the present.

for

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For

example, when a child learn about the culture and history that the country has,

this

person can actually see the hard times and the people who

has died

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have died

for her or his nation and

then

can actually take care of it in the future.

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summary, having a knowledge about the past is a very good way to have opinion about present and to understand the real

value

of the present.

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