Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Due to an advancement in the
internet
, piracy and an illegal download considerably increased.
Although
some people argue without permission downloads have no effect on the artists and others say it impacts the artists.
This
essay will cover both views and explains why illegal downloads have drawbacks. An illegal download affects the music industry artists in many ways.
Firstly
, decrease in the sales of original CDs and DVDs due to illegal downloads. A person who downloaded an
album
from the
internet
will not prefer to purchase the CD
album
. A person who downloaded the
album
can distribute to his friends without any extra cost, but
this
will distinctly impact the sale of an
album
. An artist generally has percentage on the each CD sale,
thus
, the overall income for that artist will be reduced significantly.
Moreover
, the popularity of an
album
is calculated using number of copies sold,
as a result
, a person who launched video will not be able to get the actual feedback. On the other side, some people prefer quality product. During upload and download on the
internet
, voice quality of the
album
or song deteriorate considerably, in
this
case, people will like to purchase
album
Suggestion
the album
an album
from the market
instead
of downloading it from the
internet
.
Thus
, these people think a low effect on the artist popularity.
Likewise
, some people think, an owner of the
album
also
earns from the downloads of albums, so he is not about monetary loss. They think with each hit on the
internet
,
Accept space
,
an owner will get money. In conclusion, the effects of illegal downloads are more and there should be some rules to restrict
such
downloads.
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