Teenagers in some nations work at jobs while they are still in school. Do you think it is a good idea for students to have jobs ? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer
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Nowadays
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some students Accept space
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work
along with studies. In some countries ,
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its
common practice to start working from an early it is
it's
age
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Although
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this
tendency may lead to some consequences to their health ,
some start working from Accept space
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young
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a young age
age
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and foremost ,
being occupied with Accept space
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work
is good uage
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a good use
good use
good usage
good wages
good age
time
for students.Secondly
, it teach
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teaches
taking
more responsibilitySuggestion
to take
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managing finances and Accept space
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time
management. Moreover
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an additional source of income reduces the burden the monetary burden Accept space
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from
their family. Suggestion
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In addition
to this
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jobs open new doors to connect and network with new peopleAccept space
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Also
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help
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helps
learn youngsters
the value of money from Suggestion
youngsters learn
young
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a young age
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To illustrateAccept space
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when they Accept space
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work
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somethingobtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
purchase
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they plan and budget it before handAccept space
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On the other hand
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working while studying has its de-merits tooAccept space
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To commence withAccept space
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it can distract students from their studies. Accept space
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For example
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some teenagers leave their studies in order to earn more money early which can have adverse effects later in life. Accept space
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Furthermore
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an added pressure of handling both study and Accept space
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work
at same
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the same time
time
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can lead to various mental and physical health issues from an early Accept space
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age
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working students have less or no Accept space
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time
for recreational activities.
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working along with studies Accept space
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certainly help
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