More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

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Now days, larger part of

crowd

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the crowd

a crowd

is starting

focussing

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to focus

on eating healthy and

excercising

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercising

regularly. While, there are few who still requires to adopt these habits by making them aware about detrimental impacts,

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unhealthy food could have in their lives. In

this

essay, I will elucidate the reasons behind of acceptance healthy diet and staying fit as well as measures which can help lazy crowd to follow.

To begin

with, there are several reasons due to which people have shifted their diet

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and started paying more attention to their health.

Firstly

, we live in the technology world, where our most of

work

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the work

involves almost zero physical movements.

In other words

, we

mostly spends

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mostly spend

have mostly spent

our majority of day time doing either computer job or chores which

involves

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involve

lesser physical strength.

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