More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

Now days, larger part of
crowd
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the crowd
a crowd
is starting
focussing
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to focus
on eating healthy and
excercising
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercising
regularly. While, there are few who still requires to adopt these habits by making them aware about detrimental impacts,
a
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an
unhealthy food could have in their lives. In
this
essay, I will elucidate the reasons behind of acceptance healthy diet and staying fit as well as measures which can help lazy crowd to follow.
To begin
with, there are several reasons due to which people have shifted their diet
,
Accept space
,
and started paying more attention to their health.
Firstly
, we live in the technology world, where our most of
work
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the work
involves almost zero physical movements.
In other words
, we
mostly spends
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mostly spend
have mostly spent
our majority of day time doing either computer job or chores which
involves
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involve
lesser physical strength.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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