Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Community service without paying means serving the people who

needs

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need

your help. It can take very few efforts and time of

yours but

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yours, but

can make a huge difference in their lives

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Lets

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Let's

talk about in detail about

this

matter.

First

of all, I must say children must be taught about serving others without hoping for their own benefits.

Further

, high school programmes must include social service with exchange of nothing. It would build a social responsibility and feeling of care in students for the poors in all aspects like financially, physically or

mentally etc.

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mentally, etc.

Furthermore

, being with challenged persons, they would learn to handle the difficulties of life and experience a good and bad zones of life, that would eventually make their lives smoother and easier in

future

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the future

. Doing something for someone who needs your help

without

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Without

taking nothing in exchange would keep the one away from the greediness and develop a feeling of sacrifice and happiness for being the reason of someone's

jubliance

. At the end, I

am strongly agree

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strongly agree

with the concept of serving others for free. It must be part of everyone's life right from the childhood for healthy and joyful social environment around them wherever they live.

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