More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

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A growing number of people around the word are following healthy foods and more physically active. There are many reasons in relation for that and much more should be done to make everyone health conscious. Nowadays, due to advancement in information, individuals are more mindful about their bodies and mind. Though, they try to eat healthy food and avoid junk foods as it is proved that eating unhealthy along with being generally inactive may result in serious disease

such

as heart attack and diabetes. Even, elders follow diets which contain more vegetables, and cut out on the salt and cut down on sugar because they want to live a better live as well as possible.

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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at the best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is a concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree. give reason some relevant examples.