More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

A growing number of people around the word are following healthy foods and more physically active. There are many reasons in relation for that and much more should be done to make everyone health conscious. Nowadays, due to advancement in information, individuals are more mindful about their bodies and mind. Though, they try to eat healthy food and avoid junk foods as it is proved that eating unhealthy along with being generally inactive may result in serious disease
such
as heart attack and diabetes. Even, elders follow diets which contain more vegetables, and cut out on the salt and cut down on sugar because they want to live a better live as well as possible.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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