It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent to do agree or disagree ?

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Some people argue that providing tertiary

education

for a high percentage of teenagers is impossible and useless. From my perspective, I partly

argee

be in accord; be in agreement

agree

with these ideas will outline some reasons in

this

essay.

Firstly

, having a bachelor degree no longer play an

interal

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

integral

part

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the future career of young people, even in

this

modern and

knowledge-base

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knowledge-based

society. In many countries, vocational

school

has become a better choice for teenagers who have graduated college, which offer cheaper

school

fees as well as job security when they complete the courses. It’s time-saving for young people to finish their study stage and start to earn money in order to support

family

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the family

a family

instead

of spending at least 3 or 4 years in order to pursue a

university

degree.

Moreover

, if everyone could

enroll

enrol

the

university

, it would create pressure on government funds for

education

and workforce like professors, tutors,… which is harmful to the national economy.

This

is because

university

graduates are not willing to apply the job and receive

salary

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a salary

which is not commensurate with their quality.

Secondly

, I think it’s possible to open the opportunity for a high percentage of young people to access tertiary

education

, which mean that more and more private and public universities have to be opened. In Vietnam, the number of fresh-graduate teachers and professors who cannot find the job due to the lack of

school

and

university

is beyond the alert level, especially after the COVID – 19 pandemic. By

organzing

create (as an entity)

organizing

organising

new universities, jobless rate as well as

demanding

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demands

for entering

university

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the university

of young people will be

solved

rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin

saved

and tertiary

education

in that country will be improved, which attracts more foreign students.

Furthermore

, parents who have

desire

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a desire

for their children to apply private

university

are commonly rich and willing to afford

school

fees which cost an arm and a leg. In conclusion, I believe that it’s unnecessary to provide the high proportion of young people with tertiary

education

, but in fact, most of the government in the world can open up the change for all young people to access

high

Suggestion

higher

education

Submitted by Kha Nguyễn Trung on Tue Jul 28 2020

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