Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Now a days
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Nowadays
, many people are very much
fasinated
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
to
work
at
home
than the workplace.Emerging technology reveals a
stressless
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Stressless
work
for the employees.Some people
believes
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believe
that working from
home
provides benefits to the workers along with their families and
on the other hand
others think in a reverse manner.The following passage inclines both the views. Out of many advantages, the foremost one is the environment which the workers get tat the
home
.They feel so relax and comfortable that they enjoy their profession.These results in the increment in the production.
Moreover
, they
also
posses the time for their
relaxment
.
For example
, a worker who works from
home
can take some rest if
not feel
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not, feel
well and can resume their
work
.
Althought
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Although
, there
is
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are
advantages of
work
from
home
there are many demerits that
adversely effects
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adversely affect
adversely affects
the workers and
also
their professional life.The major
disadvantge
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
is the
work
load which they
faces
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face
at
home
.The environment of
relaxment
can be reversed
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
stress.The workers do
thier
of them or themselves
their
work
forom
a giver or sender
from
home but
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home, but
they do have their responsibility regarding their family ones.They have to manage their both
life
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lives
which results a negative effect on both, personal and professional life.
Moreover
, it becomes difficult to segregate time equally. In the
nushell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
nut-shell
,
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,
every coin has two sides.No doubt, the
work
from
home
has
provide
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provided
a
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an
easy and
convinent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
way for the workers to do productive
work
but
also
negatively impact the mental health.
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