some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Although
sime
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
argue that sharing information about business or
scientific
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science
sciences
research is too
confedential
entrusted with private information and the confidence of another
confidential
, others might believe that it is nice to share them freely. And I would go honestly with the prospective of sharing is good. The reason why I think so, is that we are in an open source era. Everything is already
avaialbe
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
whenever you google them.
For instance
, with one click on the
keyboard you
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keyboard, you
can find a list of websites explaining what you are not understanding properly or you do not know at all. The
second
reason why I think that keeping information from others is not beneficial is that we do not want science to be limited for only our generation. Have we asked ourselves how the future generations would know about
results
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the results
of today's research work? The answer would be: they will know what is between our hands now because we document it and save.
That is
why we should report all details possible about our researches and scientific new technologies.
Moreover I
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Moreover, I
believe that it should be obligatory to explain
results
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the results
and methodology of research in details in order to publish them
any where
at or in or to any place
anywhere
. Being valuable does not mean to keep data secret from others.
In addition
, we should not forget how our ancestors wrote everything they knew and invented for us so that we can live the life of today. To conclude, globalisation has made our world open for each and every one and of course we do not want to deprive our successors from knowing what we have discovered nowadays.
That is
why it is crucial to spread the meaning of sharing in every aspect of life, as it is the only thing that we can leave for our grandchildren as well as the humanity to develop through the upcoming ages.
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