It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is commonly believed that living in a
city
is the best choice whilst others have a preference for dwelling in
countryside
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the countryside
over the
life
in
cityside
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Cityside
. I equally think that both of sides
is
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are
good for what is the main purpose of people. I give my opinion and my point of view according to my experiences.
Fistly
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Firstly
, the are a lot of opportunities to find a job living in an urban town.
However
,
life
in
cityside
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Cityside
suicide
is highly costly compare
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is highly costly compared
compares highly costly
is highly costly compare
to reside in the
countryside
.
Moreover
,
people entertainment
Accept comma addition
people, entertainment
such
as shopping mall, movies, and restaurants are across, the country is far
lass
(comparative of 'little' usually used with mass nouns) a quantifier meaning not as great in amount or degree
less
compared to their numbers in the
city
.
Secondly
, staying outside the
city
is breathtakingly peaceful because there is no noise pollution compare with
city
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the city
.
To
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In
addition,
life
in the
countryside
is not extremely expensive compare
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is extremely expensive not comparisons
is extremely expensive not comparing
is extremely expensive not compared
doesn't extremely expensive compare
does extremely expensive not compare
with
life
in the
cityside
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Cityside
so it is fine. But, the transportation problem is a major issue for those who live in the rural places.
For instance
, if you want to buy some items like grains, beans you have to go so far away. To sum up,
atfer
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
after
the comparison of several points in my own opinion, I suggest that people who live in the urban areas are more preferable apart from living in
countryside
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the countryside
. I completely agree with that because there
are advantages more
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are more advantages
against the disadvantages to live in the
city
.
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