Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia.As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Nowadays there are very few women in top positions of the most of life scopes, business, politics,

administration

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administration, although

although

today women are

prepare

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prepared

and have the same education of men and there are two crucial reasons why

this

situation continues happening.

Firstly

, we live in a macho society where men in top positions choose men to replace them and to occupy similar positions due to men think women are weak and they do not believe in their abilities.

For

example in

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example, in

Colombia there are approximately five politic

party

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parties

with leading men that choose their men colleagues and just a few women to be in there,

as a result

the congress have 260 men and 30 women.

On the other hand

, managers think women focus on the family wellness like the education and the care of children, cleaning and preparation of food more than in the

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

atmosphere, due to the lack of opportunities for women there are some countries like Ecuador, Perú and Venezuela where 70% of women are

housewife

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housewives

a housewife

Lastly

, companies are very warned and try to

save the

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save, the

more money than they could and in some situations women implies pregnancy money support, wasted time and money in training the person to replace her, for all of

this

many companies get the best opportunities and the top positions for men. In conclusion women have the abilities and skills to reach

top position

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the top position

top positions

, to contribute

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the success of any

company but

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company, but

nowadays it is very hard because of the macho society and differences in interests and thoughts.

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