Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

In a different stages of human
life
, each stage has something to offer. For few
group
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groups
of
people adolescent
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people, adolescent
part was more fun and joyful while for others it’s adulthood even though they have duties on their shoulders. In my opinion, to me being young was most
memoriable
worth remembering
memorable
andjolly
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and jolly
time
of my
life
. In
this
essay we will discuss both sides of the argument and conclude my opinion. For a start, happiness
differ
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differs
from one to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
individual and in
case
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the case
of adult stage they don’t have to rely on their parents for financial
suport
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
, they are entirely free from taking own decision, mature and are target oriented people. In
this
time
of
life
they are socially more
conciouss
intentionally conceived
conscious
concise
, egoism and pride takes over. Despite having freedom
,
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,
during mid 20s and above people become more responsible towards their goals.
For instance
, when asked
same question
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the same question
to the elders of my family
members most
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members, most
of them recalled about their
strugles
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggles
struggle
during their adulthood and funny memories from their childhood. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, for some juvenile period is the golden
time
. Most part of the
teenagers
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teenager's
life
is under the guidance of parents, free of financial
burgens
an onerous or difficult concern
burdens
they enjoy the most. Careless
attitide
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
, full of energy and enthusiastic to learn new things are always fun. Young children don’t have much social awareness. To illustrate, as no social responsibilities they don’t have to look for
job
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a job
or rent a place. Most of the
time
they enjoy, play and study with the same age group. To conclude, as we grow old our priority changes
.
Accept space
.
In pursuit of happiness, at the age of adulthood people get
involve
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involved
with corruption and tend to become money minded. No limit to the satisfaction on the other side teenage are naïve and innocent. Undoubtedly,
teeange
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
year
are
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is
most fun
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the most fun
and
memoriable
worth remembering
memorable
.
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