Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Life
has many phases to from childhood to the old
age
Accept comma addition
age, stage
stage
and enjoyment linked to each level, but a group of people think that adolescent
stage
is the most celebration and joyful years of one’s
life
whilst others argue that
adulthood
is more enjoyable even with the duties on their shoulders. In
this
essay, we will discuss both sides if the argument and in my view
mature
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matures
age is more fulfilling. To embark on,
majority
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the majority
a majority
of the youngsters are naive and
are totally depended
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are totally depending
totally depend
on their parents. They are happy with whatever they have and are free of responsibility. They are not much concerned with achievements, their minds are still
at
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in
learning stages following their dreams and passion. Practically, most of them have not faced any difficulties in
life
.
For instance
, young people in my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
hood, their concern is education, scoring good marks in exams and taking part in sports events
however
, it’s not the same case compare to
adulthood
.
Furthermore
, during
adulthood
that is
during mid 20s and above, people are mature and think independently. They have grown social and communication skills can differentiate between good and bad. Despite of having responsibilities and facing real
life
problems at
this
stage
of
life
, they enjoy the
life
to the fullest. Every day is a challenging day, meeting new people opens new opportunities along the path, there is
sence
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a sense
sense
of achievement. To illustrate, cracking the interview with the job offer in hand and going to
office
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the office
for the
first
time all
this
are jolly times of
life
. Juveniles will experience all
this
in the
next
stage
of
life
. To conclude, happy years are not the same for all the
person
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people
persons
,
although
for most of them golden age is teenage for me
adulthood
is more memorable and
happiness
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happy
.
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