Genetic egineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today, genetic engineering is a
breakthrought
a productive insight
breakthrough
breakthroughs
in genetics. It is considered that it will improve the lifestyle for human.
However
, some other people think that it may be a threat to life on earth.
This
essay will discuss
these topic
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this topic
these topics
. The
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
implications of genetic engineering are often discussed in terms of two key areas, which are food production and
doning
a particular environment or walk of life
domain
dining
doing
of humans. At
first
, it can reduce the nutritional value. The intervention of genetic engineering in food will create what people want.
For example
, animals with lots of meat, plants with lot of fruits, seedless fruits,…
However
, it
also
reduces quality in food
such
as the meat is not firm, the fruit will not be delicious, the flowers are less
fragnant
pleasant-smelling
fragrant
fragmented
. The
second
, genetic engineering
affect
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affects
on human health.
This
is the most evident through the change in skin
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
, eyes and hair in humans. Affecting skin
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
can make skin
cancer maybe
Accept comma addition
cancer, maybe
become popular. A more optimistic
predection
a prediction made by extrapolating from past observations
projection
prediction
, and one that I favour, is that humans will find ways to mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies is a responsible way. Using genetic engineering will make crops more resistant to insects and diseases. Scientists have carried out genetic engineering in plants that helps plants fight off insects by themselves.
Bideses
,
famers
a person who operates a farm
farmers
can be assured because
this
improvement helps plants to grow even when diseases appeared. One the other hand, genetic engineering decrease some inherited illness. Today genetic testing has become commonplace. It helps to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
genes for genetic diseases. The affirmation of relationship or identity is
also
passed on by genetics. It
is show
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is shown
shows
that genetic engineering is a
blessings
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blessing
of science for us. In conclusion,
although
the genetic engineering was many
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
effects,
on the contrary
, it brings many benefits to the development of human life today. It is testament to progressive science, which helps improve quality of
people
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peoples
’ lives in many ways.
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