Some people believe that governments should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic connections. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few individuals think that in order to decrease
road
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Road
traffic
funds should be given in establishing
trains
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Trains
and underground tubes by government. Whereas, Others opine that creating extra and broader
road
is the best solution to deal with mass jams. In my viewpoint, rails
andmetros
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and metros
are more helpful in reducing congestion. It is considered by many that railways and
tubes
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Tubes
carry many people at the same time,
sotime so
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so time, so
so time so
it is useful in dealing with the
traffic
causedby
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caused by
commuters. According to them, most of the office workers would leave at the same
timetime
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
time time
of the day so getting subway
inspite
of private car is beneficial as it is time efficient as well as
safest means
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the safest means
of transport.
For example
, In Delhi government build new metros
as a result
morning and evening
traffic
declines gradually, according to some research. Some people support the opinion that designing A new and extensive
road
would help in diminishing the
traffic
gridlock. They
believethat
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believe that
by building
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
lanes for buses, cars, heavy moving vehicles and bicycles
avoidation
the act of validating; finding or testing the truth of something
validation
of
traffic
become possible. They argue that People in train feel like " sardines in a can". So for their
convinience roads
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convenience, roads
convenience roads
should be created wider. To illustrate, In London, separate lanes are given to heavy moving vehicles on highways due to which the problem caused by slow moving vehicles is terminated, In my viewpoint, developing underground
rails
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Rails
is better as it is cheaper to use as well as it does not
emitt
expel (gases or odors)
emit
admit
any harmful gases in the air, which reduce the global problem of pollution and
road
traffic
.
Moreover
, using private cars for same The destination is futile as it only increases the numbers of cars on
road
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the road
and create noise pollution
also
. In conclusion, creating wider roads are Wastage of money as it does not motivate people to reduce the dependence on Cars. Using Subway and rails for daily life and for work saves the time
,
Accept space
,
money and helps in decreasing the
road
traffic
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