Children are facing more pressures nowadays frim academic,social and commercial perspectives.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

At
this
present
time
children face different type of pressures and spoil their life themselves.Every
child
have
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has
a distinct pressure.Some
face
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faces
academuc
associated with academia or an academy
academic
or few social and commercial.In
this
essay I will discuss some reasons of
these pressure
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these pressures
and
also
many remedies in which student can overcome from it. To commence with there are many causes of increasing pressure in pupil's life.
Firstly
teenagers are
mire
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
pressurised by their teachers and parents.Both forced to them to getting good marks.They ask them nowadays its
time
of modern
time
and they should do more and more hard work
,
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,
but parents never try to
undestand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
the children addition school bag
also
heavy as comparison student's weight.
Besides
, numerous start to make that friends whom are not good and
its
the thing named or in question
it
all happen
becauseof
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because of
modern gadgets.
For example
mostly every
child
have
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has
a personal mobile and use that applicants which are not suitable for them as
instagram
,
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,
facebook
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Facebook
and many more.
In addition
,
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,
adolescents
also
affected by other's children when they buy
new dress
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a new dress
new dresses
.They
also
become
stubbon
tenaciously unwilling or marked by tenacious unwillingness to yield
stubborn
for purchasing that same dress.
Therefore teenagers
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Therefore, teenagers
face lots of pressures and
this
is the largest reason of failure that they are distracting from their goals. Apart from
this
parents
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parent
should never do
comparison
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a comparison
of their
child
with others.
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They
can
also
spend a lot of
time
and try to understand.Teachers should
also
do homework according to children's capability.In the small age, parents should not be given permission to using
smart phone
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smart phones
a smart phone
to their children
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
in that age they addicted of phones.
Last
but not the least students
should do
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should, do
not do copy of others and they should understand situations and conditions of their home.These measures can easily be reduced the
prssures
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressures
pressure
of every
child
. Conclusion
although
adolescent have more knowledge regarding
every thing
all things
everything
, but parents should
also
give more attention and support to their pupils so that they can make
freinds
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
of their parents.
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