Children are facing more pressures nowadays frim academic,social and commercial perspectives.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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this

present

time

children face different type of pressures and spoil their life themselves.Every

child

have

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has

a distinct pressure.Some

face

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faces

academuc

associated with academia or an academy

academic

or few social and commercial.In

this

essay I will discuss some reasons of

these pressure

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these pressures

and

also

many remedies in which student can overcome from it. To commence with there are many causes of increasing pressure in pupil's life.

Firstly

teenagers are

mire

used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs

pressurised by their teachers and parents.Both forced to them to getting good marks.They ask them nowadays its

time

of modern

time

and they should do more and more hard work

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but parents never try to

undestand

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

the children addition school bag

also

heavy as comparison student's weight.

Besides

, numerous start to make that friends whom are not good and

its

the thing named or in question

all happen

becauseof

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because of

modern gadgets.

For example

mostly every

child

have

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has

a personal mobile and use that applicants which are not suitable for them as

instagram

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facebook

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Facebook

and many more.

In addition

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adolescents

also

affected by other's children when they buy

new dress

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a new dress

new dresses

.They

also

become

stubbon

tenaciously unwilling or marked by tenacious unwillingness to yield

stubborn

for purchasing that same dress.

Therefore teenagers

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Therefore, teenagers

face lots of pressures and

this

is the largest reason of failure that they are distracting from their goals. Apart from

this

parents

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parent

should never do

comparison

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a comparison

of their

child

with others.

Tgey

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They

can

also

spend a lot of

time

and try to understand.Teachers should

also

do homework according to children's capability.In the small age, parents should not be given permission to using

smart phone

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smart phones

a smart phone

to their children

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

in that age they addicted of phones.

Last

but not the least students

should do

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should, do

not do copy of others and they should understand situations and conditions of their home.These measures can easily be reduced the

prssures

the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)

pressures

pressure

of every

child

. Conclusion

although

adolescent have more knowledge regarding

every thing

all things

everything

, but parents should

also

give more attention and support to their pupils so that they can make

freinds

a person you know well and regard with affection and trust

friends

of their parents.

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Fully explain your ideas

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