An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your English studies are going.  Write a letter telling your friend about your progress. In your letter say what progress you are making describe the study methods and any materials you are using say what you find most difficult

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Hi buddy, How is

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going? I hope everything is okay! I’m writing

this

letter to update you on my English

course

. As I told you earlier, I had intended to take a

course

which I have indeed done. I signed myself up for an online

course

. It has many advantages

such

as being affordable and flexible as you can pick the time whenever you want. I have been taking

this

course

since June 1st. I see myself improve day by day and feel more confident, speak fluently, and comfortably. The approach of the

course

is unique, as it depends on a face-to-face conversation with native speakers, most of the tutors are originally from English speaking countries.

Besides

, the tutor gives you an assignment for writing,

then

send you the corrections which are very useful to enhance your skills in writing. But, unfortunately, I have some difficulties in the grammar part, my improvement is very slow. My tutor told me

this

is normal for Those who are not native speakers and by the passage of time you will be better and enhance spontaneously.

This

is my brief summary

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my progress in English. I hope to hear from you soon. Mai Emad

Submitted by mai on Thu Oct 14 2021

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An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your English studies are going. Write a letter telling your friend about your progress. In your letter say what progress you are making describe the study methods and any materials you are using say what you find most difficult

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides, and give your own opinion.

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

It is argued that people will gain more benefits when engaging in team sports such as football. Other people, however, believe that it is better to participate in individual sports like golf or tennis. I personally agree with the first group

Teenagers should never be put in prison with adults no matter how serious their crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your English studies are going.  Write a letter telling your friend about your progress. In your letter say what progress you are making describe the study methods and any materials you are using say what you find most difficult