Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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university
graduates
student
in anthropology from a
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they're
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a social scientist who specializes in anthropology
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anthropologist
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fields
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wants
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them. After five years of working, government
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time
work
field
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in one
university
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graduate
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of or relating to studies beyond a bachelor's degree
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accounted for 40 % for the amounts of 75,000-99,999 and 100,000 while the
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of 25,00-49,999 only take 15 % of the employee and the
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the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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of salary, while only 10% of
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them
can get 50,00-74,999.
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