Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

In the developed world, when the human population is increasing more and more through time, housing has become one of the biggest
problem
of many cities. While many choose to construct
home
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homes
on low-people area, higher buildings has appeared as the most viable solution.
First
of all, the natural resources in the world
is
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are
limited, but the rate of birth
go
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goes
up day by day. Regardless of age and gender, shelter is one of the most basic of human needs and the lack of home would cause millions of people become homeless. Many
city
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cities
with millions of people has to face with housing
problem
every day. At some country and capital like India
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with
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With
the high rate of unemployment and
porvety
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
,
this
even worse. A possible solution to
this
problem
would be to build
taller
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the tallest
tallest
building and houses with more flood.
On the other
hand
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hand, this
this
also help
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also helps
has also helped
to make a more beautiful and
technoligy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
city. The only
disadventage
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
disadvantages
of
this
way is that the life quality will be decreased with more trash more
poluted
rendered unwholesome by contaminants and pollution
polluted
populated
and low community benefits. In my opinion, create house on empty areas just a buy time way. It
cant
can not
can't
really help to solve
this
problem
in
long term
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the long term
because land is limited. At some time, you will not have any place to construct. To conclude, the lack of land and
hosing
structures collectively in which people are housed
housing
is one of the foremost challenges we face in the
last
dedicate and it will
utimately
as the end result of a succession or process
ultimately
lead to many of the world be in
warning but
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warning, but
a possible way to fix
this
could be using technology make higher, taller and larger construction for people to live in.
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