You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address.

Dear Sir, Hope you are well. I am writing in to express my dissatisfaction with regards to my
last
visit to your hotel during
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. I had visited Hyderabad
last
month to enjoy my summer vacation and I chose your hotel based on the testimonials from booking.com. I stayed at your hotel for 3 nights and on the
third
night, I had a terrible experience with the room climate control system. The air conditioner in the room didn't function properly and couldn't provide enough cooling to all corners of the room.
As a result
, I had to face severe suffocation for more than 5 hours until I made up my mind to leave the windows open for the rest of the night. I've escalated
this
issue to the reception desk
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more than 3 times and no proper remedy was provided. I would suggest you
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take
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measures to ensure all the rooms undergo periodical maintenance as required.
Also
, kindly follow up with the customers regarding their stay experience so that it will be really helpful to improve your service quality and customer satisfaction. Please do not hesitate to reach out to me for more information. Thanks, Santosh
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