You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

#hotel #city #weather #time #year #system #manager #action

I am writing

this

letter to express

dissatisfaction

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my dissatisfaction

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with my stay at your

hotel

Taj Grande. Unfortunately, due to the malfunctioning of the air conditioner, three nights I spent at your

hotel

were miserable. It was 12.30 PM when I arrived at the

hotel

. I wanted to rest for some time after the tiring journey from Hyderabad to Toronto. When I switched on the AC, it started making noise and was not working as expected. I called reception stating the issue and they promised to fix it in two hours but no help arrived and no

further

updates. I

had

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manage with the fan for the entire night. I choose your

hotel

after reading reviews online, but much to my chagrin I realized that they were not exactly true. I would like you to refund the amount I have paid for the air conditioner room.

In addition

, I request you to check all the amenities before booking to customers. Please consider my request to refund and do the needful Thank you in advance for your help. Yours faithfully, Prasad Vadakapuram.

Submitted by Lotus on Thu Oct 14 2021

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why this is the case? What can be done about this problem?

Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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