Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss bot views and give your opinion.

Throughout

modern era

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the modern era

, the

crime

is considerably prevalent in the world. It is very long history of

convention

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the convention

when the

crime

is

occurred

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occurring

, the criminal lost their freedom.

However there

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However, there

is

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are

various

controversy

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controversies

of

this

automatic

sentence

that criminal receives. There

are

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is

tremendous way

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a tremendous way

of how the criminal could be punished

instead

of receiving

sentence

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a sentence

sentences

the sentence

. It is highly agreeable that the criminal must be penalized corresponding their

offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

. The current law provides mostly

sentence

which direct to the jail unless

offender

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the offender

an offender

commit

serious felony

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a serious felony

serious felonies

. There

are

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is

tremendous

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a tremendous crime

crime

that they got

punished

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punished, however

however

the result of

punishment

is very uniform.

Only difference

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The only difference

is the period that

offender

stay

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stays

in the jail. The noticeable problem is that the weight of

criminal

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the criminal

is not measurable.

For example

, the economic criminal and murder is not

comparable

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comparable, however

however

sometimes the

sentence

of murder and economic criminal receive

similar

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similar sentences

a similar sentence

sentence

. In order to offer fair

sentence

, the corresponding

result

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result, such

such

as

same amount

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the same amount

of

penalty

to economic

offender

and death

penalty

to killer is supposed to be unbiased

Meanwhile there

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Meanwhile, there

is

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

argument that imprisoning is not effective. When it comes to

offender

we

are easily consider

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easily consider

are easily considering

have easily considered

that they are fairly useless to be one of member of society. The purpose of imprisoning is basically to reform criminal which do not weight on

punishment

.

This

conventional method is evaluated from some people that the

victim

or family of

victim

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the victim

a victim

is not considered Especially in South

Korea where

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Korea, where

the

sentence

is fairly light than other country

this

criminal considered

punishment

is way too biased.

For

example when

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example, when

it comes to the case of murder, the

victim

of

this

crime

case could not return any of their ordinary

life

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lives

. Meanwhile, the criminal only spend

decade

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decades

a decade

in the jail and eventually

return to back

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to return back to

return back to

their ordinary life. Which

directly imply

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directly implies

that there is any

penalty

or compensation to

victim

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victims

the victim

. To wrap up, for

victim

perspective the execution of

sentence

is fairly biased to

criminal

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crime

and

this

punishment

is not various or specific which is not correctly aiming to proper corresponding

penalty

. As the above statement mentioned, the conventional

punishment

is required to change to

victim

based legislation rather than

offen

der-cent

being or placed in the center

centred

ered execution