What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

It is true that people often buy their products online rather than local markets.Some people think that online production easily reached to them without wasting any
kind
of energy, but other think that its wastage of money.I will discuss both pros and cons in the following paragraphs. Every coin has two sides
,
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,
so
first side
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the first side
of
this
situation is advantages of buying online brand.
Firstly
, people can get their packages as soon as possible which helps to save their time. A very big example is an amazon, with prime amazon membership people can get their their delivery
next
business day.
Secondly
, it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
in less traffic because sometime when people go for shopping there is lots of traffic in front of malls, local markets which cause globalization.
Moreover
, when people buy online stuff from companies.
For example
, amazon
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,
Kijiji
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ebay, these companies doesn't have their local market. So when people buy from these
kind
of online sites,
thenthen
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then then
many companies sell goods and commodity. There are many disadvantages of customer and companies,
first
of all, miss placement of the package.When people order online.
secondly
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Secondly
, its wastage of money because sometimes we don't know the stuff or condition of profit.
For example
, when we buy clothes online, we are not able to feel the condition as we do
in
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with
the local market. At
last
, there are some advantages which overcome the disadvantages, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would suggest that people should buy local products because we can see the
kind
, quantity of brand and
also
save the money and time.People can go outside with their family and friends and share some
kind
time, which create their relations stronger.
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