Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

It is frequently believed that males and females have different
weak
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weaknesses
and strong points. Nowadays it is considered by many that
gender
identity should not restrict people’s right to obtain employment in any desired workplace (they have chosen).
This
essay will
firstly
support
this
idea;
however
,
secondly
we will mention some professional spheres where
gender
differences should be taken into consideration. The modern world is a tolerant and progressive society, which gives opportunity for the freedom chooses of work position for all genders. The history shows that the rejection
gender
discrimination affected to our evolution. One clear example is Maria Curie, which was the
first
woman to win a Nobel Prize and the
first
female professor in the University of Paris.
She
of a female
Her
gifts to our world X-ray apparatus, the theory of a radioactivity and
discovered of two
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discovered two
elements: radium and polonium. All of that once again confirms the fact that the
gender
equality is a base of progress.
On the other hand
, there are situations when some
gender
restrictions can be justified. Particularly, it’s connected with
physiological characteristics
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the physiological characteristics
of women and men. Now we have a lot of different manufacturing areas, which could have a negative impact on the health status of workers.
For example
, pharmaceutical factories, which manufacture anticancer drugs, have rules that prohibit the participation of women, which have a plan to get pregnant. Since these dangerous environments can be affect on the fertility. For
this
reason these limitations are required to ensure safety. In conclusion, our society seeks to
gender
neutrality in the world of work, which gives people the right freely to choose their workplace. And we have to move in
this
direction, because individual
gender
features could be
foundation
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the foundation
a foundation
of our development. (287 слов)
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