What are the key problems facing the world’s cities in the 21st century and what can be done about them?

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Undeniably, the rapid advancement of

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

in recent years gas proved that contemporary

inventions

Suggestion

invention

like e-books have brought convenience to many people.

However

, a wide range of traditional printed materials still play

such

a vital role that they could not be easily disappeared. Despite claims that books,

magazins

a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it

magazines

magazine

and newspaper will soon be a thing of the past, the truth is that not all of them will be elaborated because of their important values.

For instance

, history books which highlight key past events act as a major part in both the professionals and general citizens' lives.

Therefore

such

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

medals

mediums

are too

treasurous

dangerously unstable and unpredictable

treacherous

to be stored in an electronic

playform

a raised horizontal surface

platform

or freely shared to anyone;

instead

, they require extreme security and preservation inside museums or departs of historical studies. Without a doubt, e-books serve readers with many advantageous features;

however

, traditional books

also

have plenty of benefits over them.

Firstly

, looking at a screen to read

articles

Suggestion

the articles

is nowhere near as comfortable as reading real paper.

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What are the key problems facing the world’s cities in the 21st century and what can be done about them?

Include an introduction and conclusion

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it

Countries with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reason for this. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Some cities create housing for growing populations by building taller buildings while other cities have opted to build on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?