You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to hun about the match.

Dear, I was really sorry to learn
tgat
pointing out something
that
you met with an accident. I hope you are doing well now. I want to give
brief description
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a brief description
about the
match
we had
this
weekend. The cricket
match
we played
this
weekend was
good but
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good, but
we all really miss you. I am happy to tell you that we won the
match
. I know
this
match
was really very important for you as by winning
this
match
, your winning
match
score will be 35. The
match
was
teally
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
very exciting and with so
much
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many
twist and suspense. In the mid of the
match
, no one can decide you
is going
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are going
were going
to win. We were about to
loss but
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loss, but
the
opponent
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opposing
team member not able to catch the ball. It was
wet
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the wettest
day and the pitch was
muddy which
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muddy, which
makes the surface
flippery
a shoe for swimming; the paddle-like front is an aid in swimming (especially underwater)
flipper
.
Thus
, the opponent didn'
t
able to catch the ball.
This
was isn'
t
so rocking because you weren'
t
there to crack your jokes in the mid of the game every time. I remember
our
things belonging to us
ours
lst
match
, the situation was so serious as we were on our
last
over but
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over, but
your funny nature didn'
t
stop you
for
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from
cracking your joke. To the
last
, let me know
whenyou
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when you
came back home and keep updated with your health and I will give you updates about our matches. Feel free to contact if you need anything. We can
also
make some arrangements if you want to watch
next
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the next match
match
. The whole team is sending you warm wishes and get well soon friend. Best Regards, Pratibha
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