Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Some would say that making experiments with animals is wrong and should be illegal, while other people argue that major outcomes could be achieved from
this
experimentation.
This
essay will argue that there is no justification to
this
practice as people can still get allergic reactions from animal tested products, and it will show that genetic engineering cultures are a better alternative. To start with, products that have been tested on animals are not 100% benign to use in human beings. Animals have different types of skin and tolerance
to
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of
certain substances that people may find harmful. Every
year thousands
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year, thousands
of people have to go to hospital to get treated for serious rashes or allergic reactions due to cosmetic products, that according to their labels, were safe because they have been tested before on animals.
As a result
, people are stopping using these products out of fear that they may harm them, which means that companies that use
this
methods see their earnings reduced.
Moreover
, there are less cruel alternatives to test products without torturing animals in the process. Scientists have discovered that cell cultures can imitate more accurately the reaction that a product could cause
on
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in
humans.
This
means that people could be absolutely sure that no adverse reaction will result from these products, contrary to animal tested ones.
Furthermore
,
this
practice does not involve inflicting pain on a living organism, as cells do not feel pain nor fear.
Therefore
,
this
could be a more effective and cruelty free alternative to test for harmful reactions. To conclude,
although
animal experimentation could lead to important scientific discoveries, there is no justification to
cotinue
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
with
this
activity and there are more sensible and effective alternatives that should be welcomed,
such
as genetic engineering produced cell cultures.
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