Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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First

of all, I agree with the former idea. I think to see another part of the world and to see it just by the media is totally different.

For example

, if someone sees sceneries of foreign countries by TV,

then

she or he is bound to see limited scenes and angle made by camera manager. Plus, they can't take new experiences like staying in foreign hotels, meeting new friends, etc. Those who insist that travel is unnecessary might think that it would be just a waste of time or money to travel abroad. They might like to modify views and don't want to be bothered by doing unfamiliar things. I can understand some people would think it in a way because these days, media like TV, the YouTube is developed extremely well. And if they just watch videos, they would spend less capital. Still, even though it needs more cash and time, in my opinion, I think there are more advantages to travel the world. I could see various views, meet different friends, try exotic food. These things contain more than just cash.

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