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the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie chart gives information about the main reasons why agricultural
land
 becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Overall
, it can be seen from the pie graph information that
in
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worldwide
land
 degradation dominated
over-grazing
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the over-grazing
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 field with 35% and with very low indicate other section by 7%.
In
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Inland
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land
degredation
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degradation
 by
region
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,region
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deorestation
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deforestation
 shows
high
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a high
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 percentage
especcialy
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especially
 in Europe.
To begin
in
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 Causes of worldwide
land
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degradation
degredation
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degradation
 deforestation and over-cultivation have
almost
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 similar
result
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results
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for example
 deforestation shows 30%
whereas
 over-cultivation 28% in 1990
On the other hand
 in causes of
land
degredation
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degradation
 by region very low
result
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results
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ocupated
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occupied
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 by North America.
There
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 total
land
 degraded shows 5% indicate.
After
this
continent
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 Oceania countries stay with 13% results.
Very
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 high total
land
 degraded
is
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in
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 Europe with 23%. In
this
 continent
over
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cultivation shows 7,7% indicate and
over grazing
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overgrazing
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicate" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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