Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest
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the
trip
to the USA which your school will organize
next
month. I would like to join my son and other students because
my
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hectic and busy schedule I would not able to go for our
pre plan
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trip
last
month. But,
next
month I have
a
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time so
this
is a great opportunity for me to spend some quality time with my family. As you know, that I frequently visit
USA
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for business
purpose
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. So, I better know most of the cities, their hotels, foods and so on. I could pass some useful information to you and your staff during the
trip
.
However
, I do have two questions for you.
First
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is that "do we have to arrange accommodation facilities when we are staying in
USA
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"?
Second
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one is that "does any other parents are coming on
this
trip
"? I am waiting for your early reply and let me come on
this
trip
. Yours faithfully, Jack

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