People shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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In today's world

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Individuals shopping habits have been increasing in recent years due to the availability of new products in

market

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the market

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Shopping habits

is mostly influenced

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are mostly influenced

by the age group they belong

to rather than other

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rather than other

factors

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I partially disagree with the given

statement

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statement, however

however

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every coin has two

side so ,

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sides, so

sides so,

both should

taken

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take

into consideration

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From

the inception

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there are

plethora

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a plethora

of relevant factors on which shopping habits of people

are depend

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are depending

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One of them is gender

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Most of females like to do shopping as compared to males

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for

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For

example

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In our survey it is found that 60% of online shopping

is done

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are done

by women and 40% of online products purchased by men

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therefore

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Therefore

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percentage

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the percentage

of females are more than males

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Another factor is that shopping habit

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also depends

also

depend upon

income

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the income

of the family

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Rich class people buy many products to fulfil their luxurious and basic

needs whereas

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needs, whereas

impoverish people people opine twice before purchasing low price products due to death of financial resources.

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on the other side shopping habits of

also

depend upon

different age group

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a different age group

of human beings

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The little aged children

for instance

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are always looking for toys

such

as cars and dolls

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while

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While

adults get tempted towards fashionable clothes and new gadgets available in

market

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market, moreover

moreover

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senior citizens like to purchase comfortable and religious books

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Therefore

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it is possible to classify shopping habits of people according to their ages

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recaptulate

summarize briefly

recapitulate

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it is

irrefustable

impossible to deny or disprove

irrefutable

that folks shopping habits based on their age group even though there are more

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People shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

İn the modern world,it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products such as medicines and clothing.Do you agree or disagree?